If we do not care about disclosing whether the $mod 2^{128}$$mod\ 2^{128}$ operation caused $2^{128}$ to be subtracted from $e+e'$, we could just inform the server about whether the subtraction occurred or not. Then, the client would provide a signature $\sigma$ (such as a simple Schnorr signature) proving knowledge of the private key $(H_{252}(s)-b)\ mod\ \ell$ for either the public key $C''-C'$ or the public key $C''-C'-2^{128}G$ on the base point $H$.